Two rivers –
they are dripping,
flowing from her lakes
soon as the weary man
commence the leaving
two rivers –
they are dripping,
but the cause not unfolded
guess: was sorrow
or bliss the sense
two rivers –
they are dripping,
and then it will halt
for now lake is no more;
tomorrow it will fill again.
2 comments:
Pretty cool... You can make it into the "weary man" series. It's just a bit hard to imagine a river dripping... more like flowing or raging... Ano ba iniisip mo baka pond o puddle lang! Hehe joke lang. :D
hehe, inisip ko rin yun, pero a flow will start with a drip (leak would be the appropriate word, but it means another thing) and it will evolve to a flow. Tnx!
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